Self Evaluation

Self-Evaluation

What is the thesis for your paper?

The thesis for my paper was how I started to get into the sport of (MMA).

List the main points you make in your paper.

My friend Justin first MMA Fight, When I decided to fight, The training it took to prepare my first fight, Training with a actual MMA Fighter named Steve and winning my first fight.

What was the most helpful advice you received from your peer evaluation?

The most helpful advice that I received

What was the most helpful information you received in class for your paper?

The most helpful information that I received in class or my paper was how to make the paper complete. Before I didn't know how to start out a paper let alone how to make a good thesis.

How many drafts of this paper do you think you wrote and how/when did you write them?

 For example, did you compose at the keyboard, did you write lots of notes to yourself, did you pre-write or outline, did you write in small chunks of time or sit down and produce an entire draft at one sitting?

I had made about three different drafts on this paper. The first draft I wrote little small chunks of all the main ideas in my paper then described each one of them with details. The second draft I put all of my ideas and wrote them out in sentence form. After I got my paper looked over and corrected I added my thesis, conclusion and corrected all of my mistakes which made up o my final draft.

What would you do differently with this paper to make it more effectively, or what did you try to do that you just don't got a good handle on? 

What I would do differently to make my paper more effective would be to describe my setting more and I Should of described my opponent more. I'm not the best at making a good thesis so if I had a better thesis I think my story could of been a little bit better.

What are most pleased with about this paper?

What I was most pleased with my paper was the more descriptive words that I put into my story to make it more visual. I tried to had more facts, details and I thought It made my story.